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Someone expressed an interest in reading more the last time when I posted a sample of what I've been working on. I'm looking for feedback as to whether this paints a clear picture of the setting and characters. Any suggests would be welcome!

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Thanks!

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funkym3485
Jan. 27th, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC)
It seems to be developing well, IMO. I like the main characters so far and that is quite a powerful ending. Is it a cliffhanger?
megamagicflame
Jan. 27th, 2009 10:30 pm (UTC)
Hey, thanks! Yes, that is a cliffhanger I suppose. The next part of the story picks up five years later and we follow Alice. Eventually she'll want to figure out just what happened to Mary.

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